Another Story of Vi's . . . still drifting in my mind
Vi - this is off the wall, but do you remember a piece that you wrote (maybe 2002?) that I said reminded me of the e.e.cummings poem about the goat-footed balloon man? It seems to me it was set at a beach and it involved a bench . . . something that disappeared . . . part of the reason I ask is that though I can’t remember the particulars of the story, the feeling of it has never left me. I remembered it when I painted this picture called “Eating a Rainbow.”
In Just-
in Just-
spring when the world is mud-
luscious the little
lame balloonman
whistles far and wee
and eddieandbill come
running from marbles and
piracies and it's
spring
when the world is puddle-wonderful
the queer
old balloonman whistles
far and wee
and bettyandisbel come dancing
from hop-scotch and jump-rope and
it's
spring
and
the
goat-footed
balloonMan whistles
far
and
wee
-- e. e. cummings
2 Comments:
Thanks, Winnie, I love this mud-luscious, puddle-wonderful spring poem. I also like the spacing. As you can see, I'm not that familiar with e.e. cummings.
(Vi has the knack of writing things we remember.)
Actually, Winnie, you're thinking of a dream. It was the most
vivid and colorful dream I ever had. I wrote it down as I often do and post it here for you to see it again.
I love the unusual poem ... you remember some of the details very well after so long a time.
Vi
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